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How to Write a Cold Sales Email That Makes Prospects Reply

Hannah Beadling
May 6, 2022
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Let's cut to the chase. You want to see cold sales emails for prospecting.  

Okay, we get it. No fluff or pitches, just cold email templates.

Drafting scripts, dialing prospects, leaving voicemails, and (if you’re lucky) getting to have a conversation with a prospect, all eat up precious selling time. 

Steps to Create Cold Sales Email

Here's the exact formula that is use by some of our sales teams for the email campaigns. We typically see a decent open rate while complying with all federal regulations.

1. Qualify Audience

Qualifying your audience is a very important step before you send a cold email. Typically you want to find a decent size audience to prospect to start with, and it’s best to cast your net wide. The more prospects you contact, the higher your odds of success are. 

2. Create Great Subject Lines

The subject line is prime real estate because it’s the very first thing the reader will see. It’s the literal 2 seconds your prospect takes to decide whether to open your email and learn more or delete your email forever. Do NOT miss your chance to hook their attention! 

3. Pique Curiosity With A Personalization

One of your major goals with cold emails is to generate interest and get the prospect to take action. A surefire way to pique your prospect’s interest is to speak to their problems. In other words, personalize your copy! Make your prospect feel seen by identifying the problems they’ve been struggling with, and then add value by providing a solution to that problem. 

These three parts: qualifying your audience, writing a fire subject line, and piquing curiosity with a personalized message

Putting It All Together

These should all work together in your email strategy cohesively, like a s’more. When you sit down to write an email and  leave one ingredient out, you’re going to have an incomplete s’more and an incomplete email that will hit the Trash folder. 

Neglecting one of these categories means risking a 1% reply rate. So always remember to choose your audience carefully and write a tailored email that reflects the big issues keeping them from becoming the greatest version of themselves. 

Email marketing may require less labor than other sales pitching methods, but that doesn’t mean it’s a “one size fits all” type of outreach. Ultimately, emailing is about establishing and nurturing a relationship & it takes the right audience, subject line, and message to achieve. 

We hope our advice helps, and let us know if you make it to the 44% reply rate! 

Related: 17 B2B Email Outreach Templates

Qualify Target Audience

Even though you want to reach out to a high number of prospects, you don’t want to reach out to a number of different personas.

Trying to create a message that strikes a nerve across several different industries means you’re either going to end up with watered down, generic copy that’s going to hit the Trash folder or you’re going to end up with specific, targeted copy that lands in the wrong inboxes– people that have no need for your product.

Both outcomes will produce the same result, you’ll still be stuck in the same position with zero progress made.

In addition to identifying your target persona or personas, you want to make sure you’re qualifying your audience. Sending out emails without taking the steps to properly qualify will do more harm than good and you will  land in the spam inbox. 

So yes, you want a large list to send to, but don’t sacrifice precision to get it. If you send an email to a bunch of randos that would never need your product in a million years, you’re just going to end up in the dreaded 1% Zone.

Do your research and narrow your list down to people in positions, places, roles, industries, and/or markets that you know need your product. 

Related: How to use B2B Intent Data

Create Compelling Subject Lines

The subject line is so crucial. It’s not the time to be boring, wordy or desperate and spammy.

The subject line needs to stand out, but be careful to avoid spam trigger words that could decrease your email reputation and kill sales. Here’s a helpful list of words that trigger spam filters

You also don’t want to write a subject line that’s misleading. This would be like writing, “your special birthday surprise!” as a subject line for an end of the month deal.

If a prospect reads your subject line, and it’s so provocative that they click your email and find out your real message is completely unrelated,  they’re going to feel like they’ve been duped, and they won’t want to do business with you. 

Instead, look at the subject line like an appetizer. An appetizer whets the appetite and gets you excited for the main dish. A strong subject line works the same way. It provokes the reader and gets them intrigued and ready for the message, where you deliver maximum value. 

Pique Curiosity With A Personalized Message 

Be thorough with your research on the issues the prospect or the broader niche is facing. You might even ask someone in your target audience about the challenges they personally face so you can get an insider’s perspective.

All this work will help you better tailor the pitch as much as you can. 

Don’t be afraid to get personal here with your commentary on the prospect’s greatest pains because the more personal you can get, the more compelled they are going to be to do something about that problem and engage with you. 

Let's say for instance that your prospects are recruiters, and the main obstacle they can’t seem to overcome is reaching ideal candidates. In a couple sentences, acknowledge that pain and empathize with them to show that you’re aware of the problem, then swoop in to save the day! This hooks them and builds rapport. 

Here’s an example of personalized messaging: 

“Hey Emily - it’s a pain to contact a PERFECT candidate you found on LinkedIn. There’s no way to quickly find their info. 

Now you can find emails and direct dials for anyone on LinkedIn with one click of the “find” button on their profile. Download the Seamless Chrome extensions and watch the magic.

Click here to see for yourself & cut down on recruiting time!

Hannah from Seamless.AI” 

Want more tips on subjects lines and cold emails for prospecting?

10 Email Subject Line Optimization Tips:

The subject line holds the key to grabbing the attention of your audience and driving them to open your message. Crafting compelling and persuasive subject lines is essential to maximize sales and conversions.

The Personalized Approach

:"{{First Name}}, Exclusive Offer Inside Just for You!" Personalization is a proven tactic that can significantly boost open rates and engagement. By addressing your subscribers by their first name, you create a sense of familiarity and make them feel valued. Combine personalization with an enticing offer to generate a sense of exclusivity and drive immediate interest.

The Urgency Factor

"Only 24 Hours Left: Don't Miss Out on Our Limited-Time Sale!" Creating a sense of urgency in your subject lines compels subscribers to take immediate action. Highlighting time-limited offers or limited stock availability triggers a fear of missing out (FOMO), urging recipients to open your email and make a purchase before it's too late.

The Curiosity Hook

"Discover the Secret to Effortless Weight Loss" Curiosity is a powerful psychological trigger. By teasing an intriguing benefit or promising a solution to a common problem, you can spark curiosity and entice recipients to open your email to learn more. However, make sure your email content fulfills the promise made in the subject line to maintain trust and credibility.

The Benefit-Oriented Subject Line

"Boost Your Productivity by 50% with Our Time Management Tips" Clearly stating the benefit or value proposition in the subject line captures attention and resonates with your audience. Focus on the specific benefits your product or service offers and convey them concisely in the subject line to entice recipients to explore further.

The Social Proof Technique

"Join 10,000 Satisfied Customers - See What They're Saying!" Leverage the power of social proof by mentioning satisfied customers or positive reviews in your subject line. People are more likely to trust and engage with a brand when they see that others have had a positive experience. Highlighting social proof can generate curiosity and build credibility, leading to increased sales.

The Exclusive Offer

"VIP Access: 50% Off for Our Loyal Customers Only!" Everyone loves to feel special. Offering an exclusive deal or discount to a specific segment of your email list fosters a sense of exclusivity and loyalty. This strategy can encourage recipients to open your email, eager to take advantage of the limited-time offer.

The Storytelling Approach

"From Struggling to Success: How I Doubled My Income in 6 Months" Weaving a compelling story in your subject line can captivate recipients' attention and make them curious about the journey or insights you have to share. By hinting at a compelling narrative, you create a desire to know more, increasing the likelihood of email opens and engagement.

The Question Technique

"Are You Ready for the Ultimate Home Renovation Project?" Posing a thought-provoking question in your subject line engages readers and encourages them to pause and reflect. The question should align with their desires, challenges, or aspirations, making them more inclined to open your email to discover the answer or solution.

The Benefit + Scarcity Combination

"Unlock Exclusive Benefits: Limited Spots Available!" Combine the allure of exclusive benefits with scarcity to create a powerful subject line. By emphasizing limited availability or spots, you create a sense of urgency and exclusivity, compelling subscribers to act quickly before the opportunity slips away.

The Personal Achievement Angle

"Reach New Heights: Master the Art of Public Speaking" Appealing to subscribers' aspirations and desire for personal growth can be highly effective. Craft subject lines that promise to help them achieve their goals or overcome challenges, positioning your product or service as a valuable resource that can aid their journey.

Remember to test and analyze the performance of different subject lines to continually optimize your email marketing campaigns and achieve remarkable results.

Start your relationship with the prospect on a good note, and avoid subject lines that are completely disconnected from the actual content of the message. 

Related: 5 Email Marketing Hacks to Skyrocket Your Sales

Average Cold Email Response Rate

According to Clearbit, when done right, cold emails can achieve a 44% response rate.

While responses don’t always generate sales, a 44% response rate can translate to tons of warm leads and opportunities to sell! 

While 44% cold email open rate is a benchmark or goal you can set for yourself, the average response rate for cold emails is a meager 1%.

Yeah, you read that right. We’ll repeat that again: Most cold emails are only receiving a 1% response rate.  

So if there are so many benefits and opportunities with cold email, why are the average performance rates so low, and how can you set yourself apart from the noise? 

There are many factors for this like bad subject lines, misaligned strategy, or even old outdated emails.

If the later is a problem, then Seamless can help enrich existing data or provide new data or fill the sales pipeline with high-quality and verified contact data.

Related: What is Cold Emailing

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